Re: Bothersome assassin (description):

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Posted by Wanny on November 08, 1999 at 20:31:04:

In Reply to: Bothersome assassin (description) posted by Kalsadon on November 08, 1999 at 19:16:29:

> I'm a newbie to carrion fields and as such I just learning things. This is my attempt at creating a description for and assassin. Any help is welcomed.

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> Kalsadon, son of Hagon and brother of Kialas. Born in Tar Valon under a blood red sky. Kalsadon grew to become spritely human assassin, whose allegiance to good nor evil is vague. A face scared by many a beating by his father and brother, eyes of the clearest blue that cut as if a dagger to your heart. Hair of pitch black and skin of leather, he is replusive but calculating to say the least.

> Unable to find rest on the side of good or evil, he sells himself to either side for his own gain.

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> Not sure what else to put of what I need in a description. Do you put anything about spheres and imm's or do you focus on what your char looks like.


Well, as a rule, I try to focus on purely looks, because I don't believe in "glance roleplaying" Maybe a gesture here or there.
I always put something in my descriptions that make people ask questions, to get a little RP exchange going, just for a little bit of depth to your character.

Kudos to you for taking the time to write a good description.

To answer your question as to the sphere you would follow. I would say Justice, after not being given any after your family's beatings of you, you'd be enforcing your own.

I guess it can be summed up in one word, or two if you're really nitpicky......BATMAN

I hope I've been helpful to you, and good luck with your efforts

Wanny

"I don't know, they had a bag over their head" - Yogi Berra


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