Ok... try this... instead of telling me what i am doing wrong.... how about some suggestions... that is after all why i posted in the first place.:

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Posted by Ilobel on December 13, 1999 at 11:38:53:

In Reply to: Well, rank 50 and i stil, have the same desc as when i was rank 2, help in improving it would be greatly appreciated. posted by Ilobel on December 11, 1999 at 12:58:45:

> You turn around to see a tall, thin, man. It seems odd that you did not hear
> him enter the room until you notice his ears. Your jaw drops open and your
> eyes stare for the elven kind are seldom seen. His skin is pale, much like
> that of a human. His hair is unlike anything you have ever seen before. It
> is deep blue, as the rivers in Thera once were. He glances up in the sky and
> his eyes glow bright white. As he tips his head slightly forward you sense
> that there is a great power being channeled through him. He opens his hand
> to you, asking that you take it so he may give you his aid. He smiles at you
> and then he is gone again, in the blink of an eye.


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