Ditch the 'manner of arcane sigil part'. Using that manner phrase twice doesn't sounds stupid. n/t:

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Posted by Noticer on December 25, 1999 at 19:57:57:

In Reply to: Looking for suggestions posted by Cobber on December 25, 1999 at 17:13:59:

> I don't know, here's the description I have for my gnome conjurer. Just looking for comments/suggestions/corrections/etc:

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> A passing glance of this three and a half foot tall gnome reveals an unkempt mess of brown hair, which is about shoulder length and tied together behind his head. A round, and somewhat pudgy face, is home to his twinkling blue eyes and a family of small, brown freckles which cover each of his cheeks. He has small, thin lips and you notice that a space is present where one of his upper front teeth is missing.

> A closer examination reveals that the pinky finger of his left hand is cut off at the second joint -- a most curious injury, the cause of which you can only guess at. He has ears which are ridiculously large for his small head, and stick out a little bit, like miniature wings. His slightly rounded tummy, small size and childish features make him look like a young child, and if it wasn't for his thin mustache you might have mistaken him for one.

> A book is held about his waist by a cord, from which also hangs an empty vial, a small pouch, and a withered branch from some manner of plant. A thin red cord is tied about his right index finger, and the back of that hand has some manner of arcane sigil scrawled upon it.


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