Posted by Kyrs on November 19, 1999 at 18:10:18:
In Reply to: what do you think of this description? posted by a char on November 19, 1999 at 10:52:30:
Actually, I would say that descriptions, if constructed correctly, can not be "too short." However, the Ponderer is right with everything else he said. I am no description expert but perhaps you can build off of this one (I wipped it out based on what you were trying to say...woman, drow, skilled or at least pampered.)
Before you stands a lean lithe woman that seems to almost be one with the shadows. Her long silver hair contrasts sharply with her ebony skin and she seems to carry herself in an almost arrogant fashion. Her skin is smooth and unmarred...blah blah blah blah....