Posted by Pikel on December 03, 1999 at 13:39:25:

In Reply to: People like this are the reason i dont play cf anymore, i posted a log for your enjoyment that i thought was rather funny and you point out 2 dumb little things. See any spelling errors in there? Feel free to make yourself feel good anyway you can. n/t posted by WALSH on December 03, 1999 at 13:22:36:

I believe his point is your diction is poor, the rp want to is there, but its glaringly obvious to me that the line "Good cop Bad Cop" in particular runs in contrast to the rest of the log, there just aren't any "Cops" in the Thera I imagine, maybe Arbiters would've fit in, but still thats a modern day phrase that just doesn't fit...your effort is commendable.

Follow Ups:

• Give me a break Septach 16:17:59 12/03/99 (7)
  • Septach... Woru 11:10:28 12/04/99 (3)
    • You missed the point. Septach 12:01:04 12/04/99 (2)
      • Nuh-uh. Woru 20:25:57 12/04/99 (1)
        • ie "straight outta compton" is cack but "smack my bitch up" is ok, since it don't refer to modern instutions (good arbiter,bad arbiter is what is ok) Graham 05:04:08 12/05/99 (0)
  • I didn't "rip up" anyone or anything I didn't think, wasn't trying to be negative:P, and if you've every talked to Pikel...you know he doesn't speak for *&$@ ! anywayNT Pikel 07:06:52 12/04/99 (0)
  • Ok folks I'm tired...it's old english not early modern. Septach 23:52:41 12/03/99 (0)
  • I refuse to proofread as well *mutter* Septach 16:19:27 12/03/99 (0)

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