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Posted by Permanent Newbie on July 19, 2000 at 15:22:49:

Born in the dead of night upon the bewitching hour, in the month
of Ancient Darkness, Carthartes Taz'Rinah as he was promptly
named, always seemed to carry a presence of darkness about
him... Even as a small child. The blackness that hung over his
soul was not the only thing that set him apart as a child, He
also had been born deformed in relation to most Arials with
there bright colours and proud feathers upon there head and
wings. Carthartes, due to some cruel fate or past life sin had
been tortured with the fact that no feathers would or had ever
grown upon his face and neck, instead a red leathery skin had
formed giving him a somewhat hideous and devil like appearence.

His Father Akan Taz'Rinah, a reknowned thief, at first could not
except that this child was his, after all who would ever own up
to having created such a beast. His hatred of the devil spawn as
he called Carthartes would allow him no verbal contact with his
son, therefore for the first six years of his young life,
Carthartes only knew beatings from his father. These beatings
seemed only to serve as fuel for the hatred and blackness that
consumed the young arials soul.

Upon Carthartes seventh year upon the face of thera, Akan awoke
Carthartes in the dead of the night. His purpose was unclear and
frightened a rather grumpy Carthartes.

"Son" he said in a hushed tone.

"what isss it?" hissed Carthartes.

"I need your help" came the whispered reply.

"And what haveee you ever done for meee?" snarled Carthartes.

Akan began to beat Carthartes, his large fists reigning down
mighty blows upon the small arials frame. A large hand cupped
Carthartes beak shut so his cries could not be heard. Loud thuds
and muffled moans rang out as the onslaught continued.
Carthartes struggled as best he could but to no avail, he was
simply too small to break free of the titanistic grip his father
held on him.

"You ungreatful bastard, you'll do as I say, lest I kill you
myself" yelled Akan.

With that Carthartes stopped struggling. Akan then released his
grip slowly and threw him his clothes.

"Get dressed, you little shit" Akan growled "we'll be leaving
soon".

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Out of the city and into the wilds Akan dragged the tired and
bewildered Carthartes, his massive arm clutching the small arials neck
to keep him from struggling free. From Carthartes cruel looking beak
came all sorts of hisses, snarls and foul mouthed curses, all of which
simply made his captor's grip tighter.

"Whereee are you taking meee?" snarled Carthartes.

But no reply was uttered, Akan simply dragged him on. Where was he
headed and was he about to die at the hands of his father? One hundred
and one thoughts rocketed through Carthartes mind. Visions of deathes,
beatings and other horrific deeds ricohet from the blackness into
Carthartes reality and then faded away.

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"We're there" whispered Akan, as he threw Carthartes to the ground
with a thump.

"Whereee isss here ?" Snarled a slightly brused Carthartes

"The Temple of Agathocles you fool !" came Akans reply "Now be quiet
before I beat you again".

"What are weee doing here ?" he hissed without a thought for his own
well being.

Akan raised the back of his huge hand high into the air. Then with the
greatest of easy brought it down with one foul swoop, collecting
Carthartes head on the way through and knocking him into some nearby
bushes. Carthartes snarled and hissed loudly, Rage and anger filling
every corner of his being. Lashing out with both fist and cruel hook
shaped beak Carthartes attempted to attack his father, but to no avail.
All his attempts were either blocked or landed with little affect upon
Akan. Akan grabbed Carthartes by the throat and shook him violently.

"I said shut it, you little bastard" cried the enraged Akan in a half
hushed voice.

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"Now then son, you know the plan. It's your job to sneak in and steal
cloak out from under the priests nose. I'll keep a look out from here"
whispered Akan in a hushed tone.

Carthartes nodded in agreement, for he knew his hands were tied and he
would surely die if he was to refuse.

Slowly and very hesistantly Carthartes began to sneak further and
further into the darkness of the temple. His eyes peeled for any sign
of the Priest and the cloak his father prized so dearly. Carthartes
thought to himself if only I had a weapon then I would have the upper
hand against my father. He entertained the thought of a long slim
dagger being driven into his fathers side as he snuck from piller to
piller. A wry smile flashing across his face he replayed the thought
over and over.

On he snuck, through into the inner Sanctum, his beady little eyes
fixsated on the dark shadows looking for movement. A dark sense of
dread began to wash over him the further he tread, what evil had
created this place, what was to be his fate if caught?

Carthartes looked around in awe and with such fear that his little
knees began to shake violently. The walls were covered in pictures,
demonic symbols and strange runes which seemed to pulsate and grow with
the flickering and spattering of the torches light. Shadow hands
reached for Carthartes from ever corner of the room, frightened yet
thrilled by the pure maneviolence of this room, his mind began to spin.
Around and around, into infinitey it spirilled, until a single image
broke through. The image of an eclipsing moon burned itself in the
walls of his memory. Carthartes screamed in pain, His small body
writhing as the image grew brighter and brighter. On it blazed, for
what seemed to be an eternatity, The pain growing till to a climax
then slowly fading. Carthartes cackled with glee as he fell to the
ground.

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Carthartes awoke suddenly to a sharp stabbing pain in his side. A large
figure stood over him, dressed in dark grey cloak covered in the same
runes and symbols as he had seen in the inner sanctum. The figure kept
poking him with the sharp end of a spear, if only to watch Carthartes
squirm. The figure laughed loudly from behind the cowl of his cloak as
Carthartes came too.

"What isss it? Whereee am I ?" snarled a confused Carthartes.

"The Temple of the Eclipsing Moon" the figure laughed menacingly.

"what happened to me ?" hissed a still groggy Carthartes.

"I found your pathetic little body unconscious in the inner sanctum"
said the figure as he stabbed at Carthartes side once again.

"What were you doing there ?" Barks the figure.

Carthartes stutters and splutters as he attempts to make up an excuse,
but it is no good, his stinging headache and total confusion made it
impossible to string together a decent story. Bits and pieces of
stories began to come together but nothing convincing enough to fool
the figure before him.

"Utter Bull shit" cried the figure. "I know exactly why you are here,
how your father beats you and how your foul birth was planned".

"I know of your fathers greed, your mothers lust and the life of chaos
you were born into" laughs the figure.

"Greed, It serves you not, so long as it is merely the want of
possesions" He continued.

Carthartes sat bewildered, what other greed was there ? He just sat
there with a blank look upon his, attempting to take in what the figure
was saying.

"Greed for the true power is the only exceptable greed. You must hunger
for true power in order to obtain it and without this greed your life
is worth nothing" snarled the figure.

Carthartes is even more bewilder at this, but slowly he grasps the fact
that his and his fathers Greed for possessions has got him nowhere.

"What is true power you ask ?" said the figure

Carthartes nods in agreement.

"Well don't" screams the figure, "Never interrupt me. True power is
the ability to manipulate the Systems or Society for your own gain. To
do this you must have order, the order of the Systems of Society, for
example the order of ranks in an Army such as the Empire. To maintain
order you must have strength. Strength is what is used to gain true
power and to cull those that would keep you from holding it".

"Do you understand, young fledgling of the Eclipsing Moon?" asked the
figure.

"Yessss" replied Carthartes with a wicked grin.

"Excellent" cackled the figure.

The figure began to laugh menacingly, the sound chilled Carthartes to
the bone, yet at the same time hit a chord within his black soul. He
felt both the fear for his life and awe struck wonder of a manoviolent
and powerful being at once, causing him to snicker with interperdation.

As the figures laughter began to trail off, Carthartes realised that
the figure was no longer there. Where he had once stood there was only
the cloak he had woren. Carthartes quickly grabbed the cloak and made
a run for the temple doors, burst through to the other side only to be
stopped dead in his tracks by Akans large fist. With a thump Carthartes
fell to the ground, once again dazed.

"So you thought you'd leave without me, you greed little bastard"
Yelled Akan as he shook his fist at Carthartes.

"Your greed shall be your downfall" hissed Carthartes.

"And what would you know ?" laughed Akan "Now hand it over".

Carthartes picked himself up and began to hand over the cloak, as he
did the hatred and anger towards his father began to boil over inside
him. Enraged Carthartes knocked his father to the ground, seeing this
was his his chance to progress up the order he grabbed the largest
rock he could find nearby and began to beat his father to death with
it.

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After his rage subsided and his fathers body lay limp on the path
outside the temple, Carthartes rummaged through his fathers pockets
grabbing everything he could possibly need and slowly made his way
back to galadon.



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