Posted by Sladin, Bored and Productive for once on August 11, 2000 at 23:26:40:
In Reply to: Ravenloft or not, who gives a damn... posted by Elmaster on August 11, 2000 at 13:03:21:
> So what if it sounds like something from ravenloft...90% of thera if not more sounds like it comes from D&D or something similar. [Remark] Yes a lot of what I have seen has been from either D&D or AD&D, i plau both and a lot seems to have come from that type of...script. The role is a good one...generic perhaps, but detailed, very detailed. [Remark] Yes a very good role, it was well thought out and very well written, a few grammer and spelling mistakes, but hell were only human. First of all, you want something the Immortal will want to read, and immortal won't want to sit there for 20 minutes reading just your role *I wouldn't*, but then there are those who would. Try making it a bit more brief, but its very well written. *PSSST* Send me email so you can write mine to *laugh*.
But you can't ignore the other books that go along with it, such as Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, Wheel of Time series, Terry Brooks books *forgot names*, and a lot more, a lot of thought has gone into this so don't shun them....I think it's great.
Description was well written, a little odd though, try to be a bit more imaginative, from your desc you look like a silver human with red contacts. Bring out the imagination man, wheres the glowing or radiating, energy isn't going to sit idle in your sockets, its going to flicker or fade. Good description just spice it up a bit.
Sladin Coire, the misunderstood.
My opinion, don't critisize me for being up so late!