Sweet. I'm liking this one a whole lot better. Stick with it! n/t :

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Posted by sparky on January 26, 2000 at 21:57:08:

In Reply to: New Desc to critic posted by Nixsel on January 26, 2000 at 19:30:44:

> At 3 foot 3 inches the gnome before you, stands arms crossed with a gruff and solemn look upon his face. Beginning to wrinkle a little, his face is now showing the signs of age, The skin has become bronzed and bark like from labour in the sun as he toils towards his goal. Two large eyes of the brightest yellow sit firmly positioned as the focus of his face. His eyes remind you of Dandy lions and Buttercups and as you close your eyes to remember further the wind blows from behind the druid and you can smell their scent mixed with foxgloves, wild roses and other woodland flowers. A tanned protruding fore head and large bushy eyebrows comprised of leaves overhang his eyes somewhat, somehow managing to bring the cheeky eyes into a happy medium with the rest of the face. From his fore head stretches a shiny bald head that reflects the sun into your eyes blinding you for a second. The unadorned cranium of the gnome gives way to large shocks of bright green hair behind his ears that look like maple leaves and could well be. Growing out of his chin are the roots of an ivy plant. They vines mingle and intertwine each other to form two spiky points of an enormous goatee. His garb is dowdy and plain, as befits an student of the forest. Mainly Comprising of a large Voluminous sack cloth robe that barely covers his bulbous belly and portly carriage. The robe bares the marks of the forest and of his struggles, as leaves and small twigs poke from every nook and cranny.



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