Posted by A Chronicler on October 5, 2000 at 05:27:45:
In Reply to: Some input on my description would be great! posted by Dunnoyet on October 4, 2000 at 21:29:13:
But probably appropriate for a bard. For some reason I can't quite put my finger on, the part about your hair doesn't sound right. Maybe start with the bangs and then talk about the sides and back. The only major pieces you're missing are his relative height and the actual color of his eyes; otherwise, you really don't need anything more. I'd like to know what in his eyes can be seen that makes them look like they've seen storms. Is it a peculiar depth, the lines around them, a perpetual brightness like suppressed tears, or something else? Oh, and I like the voice. Are you going to use emotes to bring that voice out during play?