Posted by Zebulost on June 2, 2000 at 17:06:33:

In Reply to: Write something better if you have a problem with this. posted by Sladin on June 2, 2000 at 15:59:44:

>> A very cheesy concept, were it less well told. Good job.

> Not cheesy at all, very creative mind. Takes imagination to come up with something like this.
> Very well done

I said the concept itself would be cheesy if he hadn't told it so well. Then I said 'Good job'.

Other cheesy concepts:
1. Robot from future comes back in time to kill mother of enemy.
2. Some guy's dead father tells him he was killed by his brother, so guy acts crazy to get to the bottom of the situation.
3. Group of nasty people who hate each other form a society bent on taking over a world that is fundamentally unchangeable.

Lets make it into a game! Match the above cheesy concept with the following decent stories/plot elements:
a) Empire
b) Terminator
c) Hamlet

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• Re: Do you always read so carefully? Gremtar 17:42:43 6/4/2000 (0)
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