Could someone help me with this description?:

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Posted by Needing help.... on November 17, 1999 at 18:01:34:

You'll get the main idea, but can someone help
me so it's more fluid or descriptive....

desc + . Shadowed in constant darkness, a tall figure in a
desc + . long black robe is before you. A ceremonial robe of
desc + . the Fallen Lloth, upon the back rests the detailed
desc + . symbol of the ivory spider with blood-red fangs.
desc + . Traveling along the robe are what seems to be red
desc + . glowing white tattoes, that bridge over onto the
desc + . metallic midnight skin of the figure. Long sharp
desc + . black fingernails grow like needles from thin wirey
desc + . hands and three gigantic black claws emerge from
desc + . the bottom of the robe. Clearly an arial, elegant
desc + . black-feathered wings grow from the shoulders and
desc + . drag along the ground...dripping in blood. Beneath
desc + . the hood, red eyes glow and squint at the presence
desc + . of others: an expression of a cold hatred. As you
desc + . look closer, the tattoes begin to grow in activity.
desc + . Noticing as you look around, the tattoes extend to
desc + . the ground and crawl closer to you. Looking closer
desc + . you slowly notice they aren't tattoes at all.......
desc + . thousands and thousands of little white spiders with
desc + . red glowing eyes.

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