That one seems pretty decent, but here's my try at it.:

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Posted by Ponderer(VIP) on November 18, 1999 at 07:23:10:

In Reply to: Could someone help me with this description? posted by Needing help.... on November 17, 1999 at 18:01:34:

Darkness hangs like a curtain around this individual, subsiding only
briefly, allowing you a glance of the man within it. He's a tall man, clad
in ceremonial robes which bear the symbol of the Fallen Lloth. The ivory
spider makes its present felt as it seems to lurk, as if stalking prey, within
the darkness of the robes. Glowing white runes swirl about the robe,
appearing also as tatooes on the figure's ebony skin. Fingernails, like
daggers, protrude from thin boney hands. Three gigantic claws, hang
like eagle's talons from the bottom of the robe. He's clearly an arial, black-
feathered wings of unmatched elegance grow from his shoulders, flapping
tirelessly so that he stays about gnome's height above the ground. They
drip blood, whether it's his own or that of his hapless prey you know not.
Within a volumnous hood appear the glowing red eyes, which squint in
the presence of others, as if narrowing to pierce the very soul of passersby.
You take it for an expression of cold hatred, adding to the quiet menace that
surrounds him like a sickly green aura. Continuing to stare, you notice that
the runes and tattoos swirl about, crawling like a horde of spiders growing
ever closer, ready to sink their fangs into supple flesh. In fact, that's what
they are, thousands of white spiders, in search of blood.

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