Posted by Ok on March 9, 2000 at 15:30:41:
In Reply to: Might someone suggest how i can improve this painting... fore i get it published? posted by Aspiring Painter on March 9, 2000 at 14:39:06:
> It has just rained in the desert. The sand is cool and damp. As
> the clouds clear and the sun shines through, the water becomes
> eager to rise up once again, it missing the glorious view it once
> had. It begins its flight upward, leaving behind all that has
> joined with it, the lazy dirt trying to catch a ride into the
> heavens simply cannot hold on. As the water finally reaches the
> sky, it begins to hear the cry of the plants below, the cacti and
> the beautiful flowers. They beg the water to return, it being
> the only thing to cool them and keep them from burning in the sun.
> The water, being nice as it is, is quite anxious to help the
> kind plants. It all rushes down at once causing great floods.
> The plants are cooled and the earth cleaned so that new life may
> grow where the old has died. The water, once again eager to
> reach the clouds, begins to fly up once again.