Posted by Imperial Blade on October 4, 2000 at 09:54:22:
In Reply to: Ok, well here goes. posted by Some Newbie returns... on October 4, 2000 at 09:41:02:
> I've got the ideas I want down, but not exactly sure > Before you is simply a beauty beyond description. Tall and
> this is how I want to convey them. It's also a little
> choppy, but if you can all help me out to make this
> better, by all means, help me out.
> slender, delicate-boned, and with large luminous eyes, you
> begin to look over this charming and entrancing young female.
> Her eyes are the color of moonlight atop blue water, while her
> ebony hair flows like a beautiful waterfall of darkness, bathed
> in the shadows born only during midnight down her back, bound
> in a single thread by sea flowers and shells. Her skin is the
> color of the morning sun upon a lake - a light golden hue
> that sparkles within the rays of the sun. A rosebud-shaped
> mouth, her lips are the color of the depths of the ocean, a
> deep blue that could never be matched by any artist. Her face
> is completely without imperfection.
> She is clad in armor that glistened with water, having the
> appearance of fish-scales. Tight and curving to her luscious
> yet strong curves, a small golden veil covers her entire body,
> from her bare delicate feet to her slender neck. Matching the
> color of her skin, small sparkles from the sun show you of the
> veil's presence which seems to meld with her skin with every
> motion.