Posted by Some Newbie returns... on October 4, 2000 at 09:41:02:

I've got the ideas I want down, but not exactly sure
this is how I want to convey them. It's also a little
choppy, but if you can all help me out to make this
better, by all means, help me out.

Before you is simply a beauty beyond description. Tall and
slender, delicate-boned, and with large luminous eyes, you
begin to look over this charming and entrancing young female.
Her eyes are the color of moonlight atop blue water, while her
ebony hair flows like a beautiful waterfall of darkness, bathed
in the shadows born only during midnight down her back, bound
in a single thread by sea flowers and shells. Her skin is the
color of the morning sun upon a lake - a light golden hue
that sparkles within the rays of the sun. A rosebud-shaped
mouth, her lips are the color of the depths of the ocean, a
deep blue that could never be matched by any artist. Her face
is completely without imperfection.
She is clad in armor that glistened with water, having the
appearance of fish-scales. Tight and curving to her luscious
yet strong curves, a small golden veil covers her entire body,
from her bare delicate feet to her slender neck. Matching the
color of her skin, small sparkles from the sun show you of the
veil's presence which seems to meld with her skin with every
motion.

Follow Ups:

• I hope thats not you Aether. n/t Asa 21:52:28 10/5/2000 (0)
• My take. Nibbechist 22:09:47 10/4/2000 (0)
• Trying for a real answer here... Taithin 12:26:51 10/4/2000 (0)
• Why the hell do I even try... Some newbie returns 11:57:28 10/4/2000 (0)
• Look at mine too! Another one 10:39:32 10/4/2000 (0)
• You're going for the "Horny 16 year olds will give me free eq" angle, aren't you? :-) n/t Imperial Blade 09:54:22 10/4/2000 (0)

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