Posted by Player on June 2, 2000 at 21:35:11:
In Reply to: Paladin Role. Comments? Suggestions? posted by Pattern Recognizer on May 28, 2000 at 05:58:55:
I think the format is nice, a bit different from the ordinary 'here's my story' bit. The role itself seems a bit one-dimensional and simplistic. However, this may only be because we aren't given a real detailed account of her psychological motivation in the role. I would suggest at least one entry that demonstrates what she is thinking/feeling or why she does what she does. Is she supposed to be Cador's daughter or relative or...? That's a bit odd. Overall, very cool.