Here is another go at it...:

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Posted by Necroman on June 28, 2000 at 07:03:40:

In Reply to: Here is my desc (halfling necro) tell me what you think... posted by Necroman on June 27, 2000 at 15:47:38:

Well, I used a bunch of both of your suggestions.. Hey and the creepier the better, I have never been much of a writer. Also, I am not worried about if I happen to be sleeping not passing by. I fixedthe light on his hands thing.

A man of great stature and grace, he appears to float along as he walks. He seems to pay you no attention as he passes by, but then, for just an instant, you catch an menacing glint in his eye. He is over six feet in height, fairly tall for the half-elven race. He carries himself in such a way though, that you barely even notice him. Garbed in cloaks of black and red, he seems to radiate an aura of pure evil. His face is long and cloaked in shadow, there is nothing special about it. His eyes are a deep blue, but a sinister (you’re an english major, give me a good word here) seems to lie behind them. His body is completely enclosed in his robes, but from the way they are tossed in the breeze, you can tell there is nearly nothing beneath them. The only part of him that shows are his hands, lifeless and dead, as if they were a hint of what comes to us all.

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