Posted by If you're going to get all huffy about grammar, idiot... on September 01, 1999 at 08:09:57:

In Reply to: Translation... posted by Tat on September 01, 1999 at 08:00:52:

> The new class brings into question thing that we didn't even think of before.

The new class brings into question *things* that we didn't even think of before.

> For example, if their hurt because their familiar died? Hmm? Well, in the eyes of the laws, nobody shall get flagged for it because it didn't hurt a real citizen of thera.

For example, if *they're* hurt...

> Although, I haven't seen such a case yet so I can't see if it's provable already.

The comma after 'Although' is extraneous.

> What I see, is that this is going to add more difficulties to the arbiters' jobs and to show people that being an arbiter is hard sometimes.

The comma after "What I see" is wrong. You might do well to place one after "jobs", though.

> No other cabal get such complaining, whining and ungrateful people in their whole existance then the Arbiters do in a week.

"No other cabal *gets*"... "exist*e*nce" ... "th*a*n the Arbiters do" - although the "than" should really be an "as".

> Now, the point of this is that if you people, have to complain about the new conjurers' tricks in town, be patient, it's a new dimension that we have to deal with.

The comma after "people" is wrong. Also, the comma before "it's" should be a semicolon.

There.
See how fuckin' annoying that is?
Further, you have no excuse: I'm pretty sure Grummore didn't learn English as his first language.
*whap*

Follow Ups:

• Translation of the translation of the translation Tat 08:21:17 9/01/99 (5)
  • Re: Is this a contest of who can look the most stupid on the forum? (nt) Rune 08:42:08 9/01/99 (4)
    • Yes, and is is "Stupidest". Tat 08:58:38 9/01/99 (3)
      • *Agreeing with Rune* and tat you retard, you make fun of him then make an error in your post so shut up. WHO CARES ABOUT SPELLING AND GRAMMER? Jeeze...everyone just shut up and calm down. n/t Snuff 09:51:20 9/01/99 (2)
        • getting lazy typing your whole nick Snu? (nt) Tat 07:03:30 9/02/99 (1)
          • Why don't you stop making fun of people? Who cares if he spelt a few things wrong, he might be young, from another country, have a learning disability and your making fun of him. How would that make you feel? n/t Snuffalufagus 09:02:49 9/02/99 (0)
• Shut the fuck up, Graatch. Uhm's Student 08:19:22 9/01/99 (3)
  • I did not post above, you guessed wrong. Asshole. N/T Graatch 18:59:40 9/01/99 (0)
  • This is why Glimo's went down, You all need to watch what you say and not have these little hissy fights. n/t Ranger on Board 12:09:28 9/01/99 (1)
    • that's "y'all", not "you all" ;) N/T sparky 12:43:07 9/01/99 (0)

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